HELP !

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I'm very embarrassed to ask U this, but GUYS I need Ur help with something about my career. U see I work as a translator in a local college and they want to evaluate my work and I am not sure if my work is good enough...... If U could read this and tell me if there any problem within the language. By the way the translation is from Arabic to English...

Sorry to bother you, but I had to send you that sample so you help me improving my writing style. I don't want to make excuses, but I'm fresh graduated as an English teacher not as a translator. I have just secured this job and I don't want to lose it, so during the last two months I started translating the college website from Arabic to English, I have translated like a hundred of articles. I hoped to give expression that I'm a hard worker, but as you see with my lack for experience and my speed in work I failed to produce quality, and now they want to evaluate my whole work! do you believe that!? after two months, seriously. And here your part is come when I asked you to help me, I hope that you give me....I don't know.... like notes or instructions on that sample so I enhance my other writings. Appreciate your effort and thank you for being patient with me.
Regards.

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